This song is okay, I heard better songs, i heard worse.... It is your first song submitted, so it is unfair being so disrespectfull, the song was kinda funny :)
keep practicing :)
Thank you for the compliments. If you read closely however you would discover this merely my first FL Studio song. But I still need to practice seeing as it is entirely new to me. My former mthods of music creation were first via Adobe Audition 1.5, and followed by Sony's ACID 5.0 PRO. Once again, thank you.