Hmm needs more
Hmm well this needs more then what you have, it is a loop, but the quality even sounds abit down, you should really try and work on this, but not just that you should also work on adding more of a "MIXTURE" of stuff, not just the same beats as it seems too much of the same style, i mean its great for some sound/fx of sorts but again needs something more then what you got going, so try and improve on this, its not bad but does need abit more effort., anyways good luck.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more quality on this, and try adding a mixture of sounds in there.
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