If only it was instrumental.
I have to give you a 5/10 because I absolutely hated the vocals. The lyrics were perfectly fine, but cut the screams with some weird vocoder!
Author Comments
I'm not the only one
Cold before death
But by the time I'm done
Nothing will be left
Nothing but a temperature
The cold slap of logic
All though you prefer
Delusional bullshit
False gods became your profit
You know they don't deserve it
You know it wasn't worth it
Chorus:
It's all a lie
But go ahead and buy it
Deny the truth
I'm sure your god would like it
It sits awake and denies this state
Bringing you fear and pain
Bring you're faith that honest mistake
You know its all the same
Here is the truth the undeniable lie
Plastic stitching's the chaotic eye
Where are you're drugs
Those beautiful drugs
If they take those away
(Chorus)X2
Your music just cut me... WHAT THE HELL???
The vocals, just wow. The lyrics are fucking incredible. When the chorus came along, I seriously was pushed backwards. It blew my mind. Dude, you have no idea. I want to use this as MY theme song! Where's my trenchcoat? I'm going on a dreadfully long walk down an alleyway with my coat flowing in the wind and my hair blending to the ever-darkening creases of the walls. WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU??? HAHAHA!!! Can I use this in a game I'm making, PRETTY-EFFING-PLEASE??? It's not Flash, though. Well Done!
ZeroClear responds:
Go for it, man I'm glad you like it.
Hmmm....
I love the darkness and the crazy pulses and rhythm. The tunes is simply kickass!
But the only thing that's stopping me from giving you a 10 is the vocals.
I'm sorry, but i thought the vocals were painful and soon my ears begun to bleed like hell. To be honest, you sounded like Darth Vader with a flu who refuses to stop whining.
All i'm hearing is RAWRRAWAARRALALARALWLRARA SXXSSDPHLUBBRAR.
PLEASE, MAKE AN INSTRUMENTAL VERSION. It'll merit you a 10/10 and 5/5 and a sure download for me.
Kinda NIN style...
kinda Interlace style. Keep it up!
ZeroClear responds:
Thank you good sir.
NICE
sir i must give props to this beat and to the vocal work although its way to distorted but i judge not the artist i merely thank ye for putting the lyrics on the page which are pretty bad ass as well if you ever wanna collaborate let me know
ZeroClear responds:
thanks.
Credits & Info
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- Votes
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4.10 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Aug 6, 2009
- 4:13 PM EDT
- Genre
- Industrial
- File Info
- Song
- 3.8 MB
- 5 min 30 sec
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