I really liked the beginning. It's a good background-music!
I find myself in disagreement.
Mainly with the name. This song doesn't really convey much of a 'dark' feel. It makes me think of some remote asteroid with a small, quiet, shiny metal spaceport and an inn. Not to say that is a bad thing, that's just my mental image.
If you were indeed going for a dark feel, then I would suggest adding some bass, and remove the background tone thing (I really don't know what it's called, but it goes aaaooooeeeeeooooooaaaaaooo and such) and the click sounds and the beeping after the magnified breeze sound that begins around 1:36. Other than that... it would take a lot of changes, seeing as how there is a lot of repetition in the song (namely the little loop that starts at the beginning).
As far as remote spacey trance goes, the song does good. Good use of the echo effects on the first loop (first thing you hear), filler timing was good, then you built everything up in good order until you get to the little tune right before the magnified breeze part, which makes a good excuse for stopping the tune. Good progression to the end, placement of instruments was well done. Coming up on the end, the slow pace of the song and the clicking noises and the little beeps let the long note not sound annoying to the extreme. In fact, you could probably have left it going for a second or two longer after its accompaniment died off.
It's some time ago when you wrote this detailed and very helpful review, but now I changed the name ;D
Thanks for your enthusiasm; because there are not many people who comment my work, I am glad about every review I get. If you have the time I would please you to comment some of my other submissions, that would be very helpful as well.