That wus great!
You shouldn't change anything!
BTW Box-Killa is just a douchebag who wants to send you a virus or something.
It's not all bad, just dont give up. If you want help pm me ure email adress and ill send you my fl studio tutorial. Well did you use fl studio anyway? Im jsut assuming.
You may want to hold back on the diminished melody. The drums could use a bit of work. The hats were kinda cool tho. Well keep at it. i can see you will go far, just dont give up!!
hmm, can u review my song for me if ure not busy bro??