Not bad for a start.
Its basicly a generic chase theme in my opinion haha. Its got a cool lil beat to it. I think you used a few of the good old presets from FL =). Thats alright though for the most part its ok. Its not the best song i've heard here on NG but we all have to start out somewhere. Do not let people like the fella below me keep you from writing. The way to get better is to continue. So, please do continue.
Wyldfyre1