Beginning needs work.
The beginning sounds bad, the winds don't blend well, and I think it's a flute that holds this really high G for an annoyingly long time. Either lower the volume on that note or make it shorter.
Sorry if I sound rude, I'm just trying to review honestly from now on, instead of giving general statements.
i think the start is too messy but i the rest of the song is good
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