good lyrics, bad rapping
your brother really needs to work on his flow. i am really thinking rapping is not for him. you (if your the second one) are pretty good though, love the lyrics
Author Comments
First attempt back at recording and producing. It's been a good four years...
Balance and Rythm
The first verse was a little off beat at times, and the balance of sound in the second was a little much as well. All the same, good to see you are back into creation. Keep that up. ;)
Meh
The voice is a bit mono-tone in the start.
Tantrum33 responds:
My brother's first attempt recording, he starts off the track. Then myself. Good looks though.
Credits & Info
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- Uploaded
- Aug 3, 2009
- 10:13 PM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 2.9 MB
- 2 min 6 sec
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