Pretty Good Man
Overall the song is pretty tight man, it has well placed layers and it sounds like you mixed it quite professionally. The songs got that hip hop/ ganster kinda feel and I think that you were probably trying to achieve that, so well done.
As for critique, it sounds to me like the song is missing something. I think if you put vocals into this song you could make a pretty kick ass piece of music hear, bring it to a new level so to speak. There are also a few parts of the song that are kinda recessive points that are either a bit repetitive or just not as popping as the rest of the song. One part in particular is at 1:25 when it kinda slows down and not a lot is happening. This is good but only if it is properly lead up to.
But overall I definitely enjoyed the song, but the best part about art is that there is always something to change or improve. Remember also that I am by no means a professional and my advice is not objective but rests heavily on my own opinion. But yeah anyways, good stuff, keep em coming. Ill be checking back sometime soon.