I spent a few weeks writing this track, and this is my first track for my mixtape that I have begun work on, to be named The Lyrical Warrior. This is my very first recorded track, and the first track I have taken seriously in my writing for rap. So critique freely, any comments will be accepted. I am also aware that at the very beginning there is some basic static and background noise on the mic, this was my own fault for not chopping it off of the vocals. The beat was created as a collab between War-Spawn and Yun, and permission was given for me to use.
Lovely work here. Is this a dream or is this a reality? I think the only problem i have with this is the mic quality here and there. Other then that this song is pretty nice. Great flow. Good over all musak! Keep it up!
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