Er... What is this? Sounds like random noises all thrown together. Keep trying!
Thanks for the feedback, I guess.
lots of noise, and it doesn't really fit together. it's kinda all over the place. The two best words that could sum up this song are "wacky" and "evil".
Drum pattern was okay though.
What program are you using? this can't be fruity loops.
Im using Guitar Pro 5 with a few RSEs. Thanks for the feedback.
I feel bad giving such a low score, considering you left such a nice review for me. But unfortunately this song needs lots and lots of work, though the idea is original, and I like the guitar melodies.
Guitar is interesting, not too repetitive.
Heavy metal vibe.
Okay, this song needs to be completely remastered.
The kick is over-driven, the high-hats are muddied out from the cymbols and the crash, the crash is extremely overdriven, the guitar and bass are muffled, and the harmonies are at the wrong pitch. There isn't really a consistent beginning, middle, or end. It just seems like the verses are mixed up, and there isn't really a flow. Though I can hear the intent, it is just poorly mixed.
Things you should do:
Cut out some of the lower frequencies from the kick, compress your drums, lower the crash volume. Also try lowering the volume of the bass, and try to clear up some of that muddy low end frequency stuff. Maybe clear up the song so it follows a 4/4 pattern, and try and rework the flow. Change the volume of your bass and guitar so that they aren't the same, whats happening is you've got both sounds playing at the same level and they are creating a really unpleasing harmonic. Maybe even pan the bass slighty to one side, and the guitar to the other, NOT FULLY, but just a little bit, and that would clear up some of that weird harmonic. It would widen the song and it would sound much better.
It needs a lot of work, but I like the idea.
Thank you for this long and informative comment. Ill think about those stuff when I do a new song. And you can give me a bad score even if I gave you 5/5. But one thing troubles me... There is no bass in the song...
Sounds Like A Stick Up My Arse
Sounds Like A Load Of Clips That don't Fit
Seems like someone is butthurt for getting a bad review.