overuse of effects
and transitions without any concrete feeling of any direction - I mean it's just a lot of the same thing - no leading synth, and that time altered effect you are using gets annoying fast - also awkwardtransition at 1:30 with the B-B-Bass .. I don't know - seems rather boring to me as it is - lots of bells and whistles, but lacks content.
I also agree with the guy below - take out the horribly repetetive vocals.
The back round Was cool But U might want to get rid of the Vocals If there were any.
And Dont slow it down no matter what anyone says
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