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Starting off, the intro is cool, but I was hoping that it was just the intro. It turns out to be just a basic rhythm throughout the song and becomes a little boring hearing the same sound over and over.

The instrument that comes in at 0:13 is okay, but it sounds hollow. You should have more of a bass to help the sound of the song as well. I hear bass, but I don't really hear a bass line very well.

The switch at 0:24 is again okay, but nothing too exciting. The whole track sounds messy here. Try cleaning up the mix a little so that it doesn't sound so cluttered.

The drums are very bland and they sound like the stock set in FL Studio. I'd recommend either using different samples, or at least really work on mixing the sounds so they don't sound so monotonous.

You have a good start here, you just need to work on your mixing a little more. You may also look into your choice of synths.

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Aug 3, 2009
12:31 PM EDT
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