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[AriA] A Single Breath - WiP

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Author Comments

THIS IS STILL A WORK IN PROGRESS!

That said, i just wanted to give you guys a little preview. Let me know what you think pleasee! Things you like, things you hate, things you want changed.

Should i finish the song??

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-AriA

Reviews


niice

Dude realy nice intro and overal song is just amazing
i realy like this one nicely built and every thing
Definitly finish this song dude :)
Check out my songs too if u want xD

Realy nice work!!
10/10
5/5
keep up the good work



You're a Great Story Teller...

Soo ummm, where do I begin.... You're a genius!

Why?

Anyone who is able to tell a story with their music is a genius in my book.

What kind of story do I think you're telling?

Some mystery guy, of unknown origin, has done something unthinkable in the eyes of the magistrates who control the city. And so he runs and runs and runs breathing in heavily with each gallop. Its night time as he begins to cross a narrow bridge under the background of city lights.

Well that's as far as I can interpret.

A lot of people have been saying that you should make this composition longer, I say make this story longer.

Don't think of this as a catchy tune, and I can tell that you're probably not in that mindset anyway.

Just stick with the idea of telling a story.

If you need inspiration, check out Vangelis, Harry-Gregson Williams, and Jean Michelle Jarre. You'll see what I mean.

Good Luck ^_^

P.S.: The 5 and the 10 is to boost your popularity and for other people to earn an oppurtunity to listen to this genius.


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IndieDance responds:

xD thankss! i definitely do NOT consider myself a genious by any means but thank you! and yeahh, i lovee telling stories with my music. =]


lol dude, umm..

This song is pretty good, its just good and short!!! plz oh plz make it longer, Im glad u said its still a work in progress. This good song song needs to be longer.

And also, anotehr thing, try not to take so much time actualy "getting into" the song. Because it was half done by the time it was "into" the song.
Other than that, it was still pretty cool. Keep uphte good work dude ~XD~

Would u mind checking out some of my songs? I woould really appreciate it. ~XD~


IndieDance responds:

hmm i like long intros, i guess its just a personal thing though? and yeahhh it still has a lot more to go hahhha. and suree ill take a look =]


Sounds good!

My only issue is the beginning and the comment from the review below...
But good work!
Keep it up!

4/5
8/10

Check out some of my stuff!
ShootingStar


IndieDance responds:

sweet, will do thanks! =]


Really Good

I'm loving this song. Great melodies and sounds.

Only thing is, it needs more drums. The dancey-rave really only starts at around 1:30 and only for a minute. I know this is a WiP, but you might want to have more thumping bass to keep up the dance beat.

Definitely keep working on it!


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IndieDance responds:

awesomee k thanks! =]

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Credits & Info

IndieDance
Author

Listens
1,053
Downloads
66
Votes
28
Score
4.26 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 2, 2009
4:42 PM EDT
Genre
Dance
File Info
Song
5.8 MB
2 min 33 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.