Cut the ending a little bit shorter, otherwise it's a 10. This reminds me of some bad memories... lol. Like the time I hit a car in the windshield with an apple with my neighbor. We rolled it down my slightly bent driveway and it hit a bump, jumped up, and hit the car. We just wanted the car to hit the tires... but.. i fucked it up... lol. We ran, and expected the car to keep going, but it stopped an turned around. I got grounded for 3 days, my neighbor got 1 week lol...
Lucky me huh? And I'm the one who threw it! 9/10 5
Goddamn! Howcome Im the first to review two of your works?
This one wasnt as good as .. another of yours but I liked it