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My first metal song

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a little idea for my first song and would like to know your opinions.Changing solo later.


sounds like a good ole maiden tune

yeah old school mutha fucka

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speedmetalmessiah responds:

Really? I always got more of a Priest feeling from the intro, though now that I lesten back the end sounds a lot more Maiden influenced. The rest is pure shit, but I still like that intro. Thanks for the review.

wow very impressed

for a ur first metal song sounds like its been like ur 5th lol keep on goin metal shall stay pumpin raps sucks

speedmetalmessiah responds:

It's actually quite horrible, but thanks for the compliment man.

THAT was your first?!

Man - you're a guitar hero. I don't have words to describe it. Even if the quality is poor I can still hear some pretty damn nice sounds!

Well... that was my last review for you (at least for now). You propably noticed, that I haven't rated those mario songs. That's becouse... I'should be ashamed, but I just don't remember the original ^^"
So if I had to rate your whole work in one review, I'd say: "Hey, dude you roxx! Keep perfecting your work!" And I wolud give you 8/10 stras.
Also - my favourite songs are: "SLOW/CALM LOOP", "Pico Battle Loop of DEATH!!!!!", "For Whom the Bell Tolls cover", "Orchestral Aggression", "This is Christmas", "Call of The Wind", "To Battle-loop", "Speedmetal's Rock Loop", "Breeds of Insanity", "Speedmetal's Rock Solo!!!!!!!", "Calm Nights", those DOOM songs and of course "When The Light's Go Out" which made me review all your submissions.
Word of advice - experiment with many styles. You're good at that.

Keep up the good work!

speedmetalmessiah responds:

YOu've managed to impress the hell out of me man. Seriously, I never expected anyone to do that. Thanks a hell of a lot. Though I still say this one is shit, haha. I'm glad to have gained a fan. I really appreciate all the reviews. I'll also definitely experiment with a lot of styles.


was actualy prety good till it got to 00:34 right before the solo that kind of came out of nowhere. otherwise i kinda like it. bad ass intro.

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Yeah, other than the intro (which I still surprisingly like) this is utter shit. I still like listening to it every now and then to hear how much I've improved though.

Drums were... scarce

I suppose it kinda worked. the Drums being so clear and scarce was an almost annoying contrast with the distorted guitar. But the riffs themselves are good.

I was annoyed, 'cause it ends like, RIGHT as the drums kind of become more regular. or something.


speedmetalmessiah responds:

Yeah I wasn't sure what the hell I was doing when I made this. It was my first time recording and I really had no clue what to do. Thanks for the reviews Qwertyuiopasd.

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3.56 / 5.00

Jun 9, 2005
5:34 PM EDT
Heavy Metal
File Info
945.1 KB
1 min 0 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.