First, let me say that I'm truly sorry for having submitted-basically-the same song 45 minutes later. Honestly, my intention is to not spam Newgrounds. Basically, I've added a techno like feel to this song, incorporating drums and other stuff to complement the strings and piano for, to me at least, an even better song. But my opinion doesn't mean squat. Please everyone, tell me what you all think of this. Is there potential? Maybe not? Good? Great? Terrible? I read all comments peeps, mainly because I don't get many. Feel free to bash this song or compliment it to your heart's content.
pretty good
Its not adventurous really. Other than that, the drums were really cool and add abit of more claps to the actual body of the song and maybe It will deserve a 9/10 .
GL on future submissions.
BTW, why dont you check out some of my music too?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Ermundo 
