00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme

Agent03982 just joined the crew!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

Zone 1 [DEMO 3]

Share Download this song

Author Comments

did some equalizing on all the instruments. let me know what else i can do to make it better

Log in / sign up to vote & review!

Newgrounds accounts are free and registered users see fewer ads!

okay...

lol dude, It needs bass. and maybe I'll give you a 10/10. But for now it deserves an 8

btw, why dont you check out some of my songs?

You EQed?

I'm sorry, but that's hard for me to believe.

It's quite mushy in terms of the overall mix.

Feels like a lot of stuff is being compressed to the MAX, which isn't good, especially your lead.

Your bass is really muddy, and is over-powered by the lead.

Perhaps there's too much reverb on the bass, or are you actually using your lead as the bass? That's not all that good of an idea, but you want a distinct bass, and using a mid-lead down there really doesn't sound solid.

1:50 sounds all jumbled up, and doesn't really sound all that good. I'm not sure about direction with this piece. It's quite boring and repetitive. Your rhythm doesn't vary, and there are no FX/transitions. I didn't even hear one Crash Cymbal.

This needs work, and I'm aware that this is a DEMO, your 3rd in fact.

Keep working on it.

jbarnett responds:

thank you for the review. as i may have said before, I dont get many of them. so that makes it hard to fix problems. i will work on it though

meh...

wheres the bass line man? and you could filter/fade in some of the sounds... not bad... keep workin on it :)
check me out if u want

Credits & Info

Author

Listens
531
Downloads
34
Score
Waiting for 2 more votes

Uploaded
Jul 30, 2009
3:49 PM EDT
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
4.2 MB
3 min 41 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.