try to shorten the intro, and adjust some of the instruments- try things that don't have such a strong attack- that steel drum really didn't fit too well.
lol, i like the style
I feel like it could use a bit more substance at the beggining, but overall it's a pretty neat song! a little repetative for me, but overall it's pretty neat! keep it up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.