quite entertaining

Entertaining. I like this type of music when I'm on the go, or showing an exhibition in the city (N.Y.C). It also reminds me of the softer sides of other artists (Paul Okenfold, as an example...), which is never a bad thing.

My question is, can you make an extended version of this? I always ask this to people when they create a work- be it trance, techno, hip hop, etc.- to see what
other things artists can do down the road and how they can evolve their songs
to their fullest extent.

Otherwise, keep up the good work. I look forward hearing more of music such as this.

Not half bad.

This is pretty good, I'd say. The only thing, is that it seems a little empty, like it's unfinished. Some more pads, sitting in the middle of everything, or maybe a backing, counter melody would fix that right up. As is, it brings to mind of a single man, sitting on a hill by himself, watching the sun rise. He seems a little lonely. Also, the lead that comes in about half way through is a bit loud. All in all, it's pleasing to listen to.

pretty good

pretty good song yo. just needs a bit more variety, but other than that, I Liked it