ok i guess..
The synths in this song is good, but it gets quite monotonous at times, you should keep a consistent and recognizable beat, i keep losing track of rhythm at times, (dont use hats like they are in the song rite now) have a a kick on every beat of the bar or something, that's standard for general tpyes of techno. Also, sometimes the filter gets a little too dull for the synth to sound good.
thanks man, I need some constructive critisisum.
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