your end song in 2016. There you in 2021? You is best i listen to you is always. Maybe,you think and start again to make masterpiece in 2021

Begins okey

The "piano" in the beginning I really like, and when the string entered too. It really fits well together. But as soon as the kick started I when from :) to :(.

The kick 'n' bass are pretty plain and boring. You should try to make something before the kick, a fill or something. As it is now, It really dosen't fit together.
Try to customize your kick more, just a tip ;)

Otherwise the melodi's good. keep it up!

Like it!

It's a nice piece of work, although it's a very poppy style you use on this track, but i guess you wanted it to sound like that.

Actually I don't like mixing up piano (similar) instruments with synths, but you handled that task quite well. Mostly I think i enjoyed the more peaceful part at about 2:10^^

All in all great song^^

Review

The beginning seemed very emotional and interesting (2)
The bass at around 1:15 help the transition (2)
Great array of sounds and melodies (3)
Good switch around 2:40 (1)
At 3:35 the solo was great and interesting that is good for a long song so it has hardly and repeating garbage (3)

The bass kick could have had a little more power by changing the rhythm and adding accents (-1/2)
At the end it felt as if it should have had more. Maybe like the beginning. A transition to another slow instrument would be nice (-1)

9 1/2 out of 10 5 out of 5