Awesome. Sorry I didn't do a constructive comment. Too tired. It's not housey enough though, but who gives a shit, I'm not gonna give it less a rating because the genre you listed it in was completely correct.
Variations of sounds and rhythms.
Good mix of 8bit and modern sounds
Nice accents and pauses
Very weak bass
Maybe change the melody or background and use that to introduce a different set of sounds
thanks, i love constructive comments like these, and i will soon fix the improvements :).