You had some really good parts going.
It sounds a little washed out though, and the gutair had a weird sound that kinda caught me off guard.
The drums were pretty good, but a little repetitive. Some of the gutair chords you used were kinda screeching, but hey, that's what rock is all about.
Drum roll kicked ass... lol
This wasn't all that bad, just some of the parts were mixed poorly.
This doesn't deserve the score it has.
anyways, hoped this helped.