Very simple, but it sounds like it's going to be good when it's finished. Very good start to it all around. Kind of generic, but you still have a little bit of work to do on it and everything. Decent intro music or credit music to a RPG type of game, but could probably fit in many other types of games too.
The only thing that I have a complaint about is the lack of an ending, but of course that's because your not finished. Keep on working and this should turn out pretty nice in the end.
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I have a slight problem here: I love piano, but hate techno..
The piano intro was quite nice..If I were you, I would have just made it a piano song, as you obviously have a talent for piano. The beat was a bit fast and didn't really go with the piano, but it wasn't too bad..When that techno thump came in I just gave up hope though...I guess it's just not my thing..
The ending just cut it off completely. Try to end it properly.
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Ive actually redone the piano a little bit since i posted this. It flows through the intro a lot better. If your willing to listen through the techno i might be adding more piano: The only thing i have left to do is determine the direction of this song, theres so much i can do with it.
but thanks for the review :)
A little too much static
It's got potential, as through the static at the top of the notes, I can hear a good tune poking its head through.
A good piece of piano and a decent beat encourage this song to take the next step - perhaps introducing a few vocal samples will be the next step that causes the track to blossom. I can certainly see it becoming something a lot better when you spend some time mastering it all.
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Theres really no static per say, just a lot of high requencies. For example, the closed hi hat on the beat @ 00:27 has a phaser + reverb wihich seems to give the static sound.
ill work on the higher freqs tho if its too much
thanks for the review
Looking forward to the finished product
Score: 7 / 10
Summary: Looking forward to the finished product
Review: This sounds absolutely great, even though it's clearly a WiP.
I love the slow, soothing intro. Builds up to the song. I think the drums are a little overpowering towards the piano, you should try to even those two out. Add some baseline, and more drum samples. Vary it a little, mix it up.
Looking forward to see a finished product! If it sounds awesome now, I can't wait to hear it once it's done!
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Drums have been reduced slightly and piano and bass have been increased, thanks for the tip
Wow, not bad!
Very good start. Seems like it's going to turn out to quite a great song. :)
Loved the intro; a little blurry, but the notes were great. I expected a new instrument to come in at around 0:55, not stay piano. The drums seemed to overpower the piano, so maybe you could use some saw synth and a high plucked instrument in the background, plus some bass?
The drums overall were very good, and varied pretty well too. they were built up quite well. Some more variety of drum samples would fit pretty well, but it's still not bad as it is.
I enjoyed this quite a bit. An excellent start, I'm sure it'll become an awesome song. Good luck XD.
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Ive rebalanced the piano and drums, so that should be fixed, thanks for the luck, and the review!