I second the comment on the drums, but not to the extent. i still widely enjoyed the song. the melody sounded quite simple and still managed to keep me listening.
its not to bad.
Could use a lil more eq work, the instruments are a lil overbearing and loud. The generic FL "Dance" bass drum your using here is kinda over played and makes me almost wanna turn the song off cuz i hear it in almost EVERY new persons track on NG (trust me i did it too so i can understand). All in all this isn't all that bad. Keep up the music.
I agree, for a new guy, the DnC drum is basicly the only real kick that is default with FL, It's sorta hard to find new stuff for it.
Anyway, thanks for the review!