not too bad.
For one its a small loop hahah so its like as you get into this it kinda starts to loop. If you would of used the whole song and some imagination this would of been freaking awesome. Also your synths are lil loud. You may want to turn down the volume a tad on this. Thats my only real complaint on this song other then its way to short (even for a loop hah)
Yeah lead is tight
could be turned into an awesome dance track if percussion background pads and fillers were added.
also sidechain the lead to the kick to give it that fade in and out feel.
Kinda simple, and a little small, but a good song to remix. I think some notes at the end weren't right, but everything else was fine. If you're continuing this, I'd suggest a rock remix. There aren't many of rock. But if you're planning hardstyle, this'd be fine ^^. Needs some good drums to it, but still, pretty cool and a good start :].
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.