Uhh...
Sorry for a low rating, though... This isn't really my kind of music, I'll tell you that first...
It got repetitive at many points in the song, and the use of instruments is very limited. The tempo is a tad bit too slow (fast songs are the "in" thing today). And about 3 minutes into the song, it started to get a bit boring...
Honestly, I'm not trying to offend you, or say that it sucks. I can tell there was hard work put into this and all, though... This is just me.
I just suggest being a bit more... "In"... If you get my drift.
Though I'll vote 5/5, for hard work.