Constructive Criticism! :)

Hmm, well considering I am the first to write a review on this I think I should at least give some constructive feedback. I liked it, I really did, but this song was just way too long. First of all your layering on the first 2 minutes was good... But It needed to be a minute shorter. Maybe now repeating the same thing 3-4 times. :)

I liked the transition at 2:25, but I just didn't like 2:40-3:00 at all. Now that may just be me and my hate of slower music with no background beat, but this is trance and I think there should be something behind there ;)

I loved the transition at 3:20 though, that was nice.

The last 2 minutes of the song were great, but like I said before it got a little repetitive, and needs some shortening. The last thing I have to say is more of just an idea than criticism. At the end instead of just ending it with a clash, I think it would have sounded cooler to end it with the panning sounds in the background, just by themselves.

Just a thought ;) Thanks for this song, I give it a 7, and I'll download it. :)