WOW
I think that this is probably your best piece even out of your new ones
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This is the first song i ever made.....actually made it on the trial version. trying to get full version. please tell me what you think of it good bad i don't care.
Wow... first!?
It's pretty good, it feels energetic and exciting, but there's no wind-up or wind-down. You should start slow and smooth, than add the percussion. I would suggest starting with some light but dark sounding strings, or a plucked cello. Or you could turn the song into a loop, by making it repeat smoothly.
I rate based off of technical value and emotion. I take my emotional rating double it, add my technical rating, then divide by three.
I think this song is 7/10 technical, but 9/10 for emotional value. so that averages to 8.333 which rounds to 8/10.
Keep up the good work, practice hard you'll get pretty far, I'm still amazed that this is you're first song. Good luck getting that full version, and good luck in general :) !
thefreak118 responds:
ya i know what you mean by no wind up or no wind down so thats what im kinda focusing on in the next song im working on should be done soon
Sweet, I like it!!!
I'm new at making music too!! and I think that is great, definitely if it is your first time!!!! The only thing is that I think for how epic it sounds it should have been longer and have more build to a climax. The song was just climax the whole time!!
thefreak118 responds:
ya i know what ya mean i'll try to fix that in my next one
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