Not bad

Well...I thought this was alright. I would complain that it is repetitive, but if you made it for a game than that doesn't come into play as much. I don't really like what you did with the bass, just didn't seem to come together. I also think you shouldve put more emphasis on the drums, they feel like they are more following the melody line than setting the beat. Hope this helps you, and hope your project turned out alright.