Its not bad at all. Considering your not the best at this. this i probably a big change in your music and you've gotten alot better. I say just work on the base. Your percussion needs some up beats and down beats, in other words, it needs some reps. i gave you a 5 only because i thought the song was better than a 2.9. Its now a 3.12 but with a little work to the song and learning to make basses and counter melodies will make it sound like at least a 4.
i love the main melody.... awsome choice of synth.... the bass line gets a bit dull by the end, i give a 9
review me 2 plz :)
Thanks man, will do.