i like how different it is
i noticed quite a few mistakes, but for just keyboard, this is pretty awesome! i can't see anything else going with it besides some epic guitar and acoustic piano. try to fix those mistakes and expand on the song a bit. the off key stuff could use some work too, however different it makes the song sound, but overall, i love the beauty of it. keep on makin songs!
you hit alot of off-note keys, and it makes it sound eerie. not only that, it's extremely erratic and hard to follow, which makes it creepier. i tried really hard to listen to the nice tones of your harpsichord-esque synth or whatever you use, and its sugar-coated reverby sin, but i just couldn't do it.
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