ok... well...

you could take the first 45 seconds or so... and add them 2 a dance type 4 on the floor beat... the harmonic-y organ that comes in at 1:05... is really cool, but iwouldn't know what 2 do with it 2 make it better :P... i didn't really like the steal drums-esk sounds at 1:35ish.... again, the pad at 2:05ish is great, but it sounds like u may miss a note or 2... the rest seemed totaly random... a solid 8... listening 2 remake now...
check out the new song if you want :)