Better synths

The lead (or w/e) is good, but it is lacking better a better synthesized sound.
I am not saying use the overused supersaw. Just somthing a little less soft.

Did you use a pulse/square waveform on 2 oscillators with with different pulse
widths? because that was used alot in the video game day.
And yes, I AM taking into account that this is easy listening, same thing applies.

I think the other guy meant it needed some drums or bass.

Anyways, I like it. Good progression. Just like I said, better synths. And I would
like some more bass as well.

It isn't good enough to sell YET. It COULD be, just work on it. I don't think many people would go and buy your album just by hearing this song (no offense).

4/5 - 8/10

I wouldn't buy it

It's good, but it's missing alot of push. It would make okay backround music but...