I like that stuff !
especially the "voice effects"
could make a very good loop :p
The beat, although very audible and assertive, is inconsistent. I can clearly hear what you're trying to do so by no means be discouraged, but there is a lot of house cleaning to be done and some timing issues to be hammered out. Also keep in mind the tracks and layers and where they are and what they're trying to sound like. Two tracks when put together can sound totally unique and apart from each individual track (this works as a double edge sword).
On the positive side of things: I love the voice, keep that up and you've got a winner. It's very hard to get that right and I really think you're on the right track with it, congrats! With that said a good example track to keep in mind as a study model is BassHunter's Loituma Leva's Polka Remix. I'm not suggesting that you follow it as a template, just keep it in mind for what I hear you trying to do.
To be honest I was going to give you a 4. No lies, straight up a 4/10. Now that I'm thinking about it, and with the hopeful prospect you see this project to completion, I'll change that to a 6/10 for the potential this project carries. I'm excited to hear where this will go, keep it up and this should be a #1 with thousands of downloads no problem.
Decent start and good luck,
I didn't enjoy this
There's too much crash symbol reversing or whatever you call that. It takes it from being enjoyable to really obnoxious.
the first few seconds freeked me out (bass on max) but thats the point really, i feel ever bit of darkness in this song 10/10 5/5
Before I even read your comments I knew what it was because of it's dark tone and straight away you are able to guess what it is about. That os always a good quality to have in a song. Well done. 10/10 for the song and 10/10 for effort. Keep it up.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.