The vocals...

I love your enthusiasm, but bring it down a notch. The vocals completely drag down the quality of the track. Now don't get me wrong, I use screaming vocals in my tracks as well, but you are way too loud. Your overpowering the rest of the track.

As a listener, I want to hear what the guitars, drums, and bass are doing along with what your singing/screaming. What I'm saying is mix your voice in with the track, don't just sing over the music.

As far as the rest of the track: From what I can hear the guitars are sweet, but the drums are a little too strong as well. This track could be great, you just need to work on your mixing a little more.

meh

the singer was off and the fluctuated too much. hatebreed is really level and it flows with the music way better. it was like an emo scream instead of a heavy metal scream which is what the song is. not a fan.