Your a begginer, right?
Well i give you six because your a begginer. I also give you six because....the song wasnt pleasant to listen, there were so many things happening and it was very hard to understamnd what was going on. But nether the less, i'm sure you will get alot better over time, it's just practice. Although i gave you a 6 in this review though, i will vote 5/5 for this song, because i know that you will make a good music producer. Keep practicing
that will work fine...
I like how it sounds at the begining, but at 0:06 the notes start to jump around too much. you could just stretch the notes like at the very start, because it gets unpleasant after that. but I think it will make a great song! especially if you add some heavy beats after this intro, good job!