The beginning like 5 seconds is good, if you could up the volume on the melody there and take out the synth I think it would sound better.
well see, i synthed nearly everything in this song. could you be more specific? is it the fading ambient noise, or the...semi orchestral organ....or the drum beat that is the problem?
It would be decent
If the sythesizor was toned down, I liked the very beginning, but when the synth kicked in it was terrible.
would you be able to tell me at like, what time in the song that would be so i can quickly avoid this problem?