Good song, but...
You asked for some cc, so I'll give my 2 cents. The base seems way too mellow, needs a tiny bit deeper a sound to it, just don't go overboard with it. The melody could use a bit of variation imo, but it's still pretty good. Good job with the timing on the kicks and with those tweaks, I think it'd be 10 worthy. :P
9/10 5/5