Meh, i wasn't really feeling it, it was your first dNb, which is good, considering it was your first (That sounds a little redundant... :P)
Anyways, i dont like the high pitched melody, it was annoying and kinda took away from the chours. The drums weren't that bad, though, wich is the focal point of dNb in my oppinon.
Keep working at it :D
thx for the review mate,
ill try to work on it next time ;D