I really enjoyed most of it.
The only thing I have a problem with is what I believe to be the closed hat? or hats? Its very clicky, and way to loud. Its hard to really get in to the song with it like it is. If you want to use it in a game, I think it'd be great, but only if you fix that problem. Any game with the closed hat clicking away like that would get really freakin' annoying fast.
3:32 and onwards is really well done. But the bass is just a tad bit loud. I'd try turning it down to make it smoother.
- Fix that click (closed hat, or w/e it is)
- Try turning down the bass a little bit between 3:32 and 4:11.