This is nice man. Pretty smooth, which I think works here, but also maybe could be a little more dramatic....which would change up a lot the song which really isn't the focus here..... i think. I think all the parts fit well, good job on picking them out to play with one another, they prolly are having fun too lol. Maybe not a battle scene aftermath song, but throw in some surviving kids and the army guy they is carrying them and ya, i could see that. Keep it up.
well i really like songs like this and i think it is suiting to your inspiration but thier are just so many songs like this that it isn't as amazing as it yoused to be i think we need new ideas good work though