I don't agree with dude23!
I think the beat is hot. It sounds like a cartoon network adult swim commercial. I think if the were turned down and have some kind of flang on it, the beat would be a mos def 10. we got the same kind of style a lil bit. Keep at it bro. Maybe we could collab one day. oh yeah, 4'd and 8'd.
This needs more than some sliced vocals and a good beat. I would STRONGLY recommend adding a bridge to the peice, and a melody. As it stands now, the song is boring. If you add a melody and a bridge, it will be better.