Very good

The whole bell part was pointless and there was something missing.the end part was really awesome and if you could just remove them damn bells, i could give you a 10,for the most part of it was catchy

Work on your kick

The kick needs to sound more, hardstyley, if you know what I mean.
Go to YouTube and watch some tutorials on how to make them, or get some samples or something.

Apart from that it's okay. I didn't like the saw, but that's just me.
The melody in the intro reminds me of Gremlins for some reason, 'cause of the sound, not the tune. And it gets tedious.
I don't know what that little dink sound is right at the start, but it's annoying, and seems very pointless.
Also, it comes out of the main melody too quick near the end.

But you seem to have the basic idea down, just need to practise :)

meh

not much texture to it, sounds really badly mastered

melody sounds out of key at points

just keep practising and ye shall improve

A little empty

This is a good base but it feels like something is missing, especially in the beginning. It gets better in the middle of the song.

I think it sounds a bit too generic for my taste. It's mostly just a kick and a saw. I like that submarine sound though.