You, my good man, have an excellent start at this! I think you have something to work with! I look forward to hearing more of your work. Yes, not a lot is there, but its whats not there that counts leaving you room to grow....
I have to be nice =O
Im your brother. This song is actually awsome. Going at the top of favorites in internet explorer, and on newgrounds =D.
why thank you bro! =]