interesting

I've got a song that i made like this one, a bit more ominous, yet like it, and it is by far one of the funnest song styles to make. however, you need to up your drums, down the high hat, and make a solo or two in it. overall, it's pretty awesome ;)

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The drums should be louder, cause they sounded sorta washed out.

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The melody you used was good, and the instruments used were nice.

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this was a good video game song.

Keep writing, sorry i couldn't go into more detail :P

Well, peace.