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omg it makes you cry, i'll use it when making situps, thanks pal

Oh yeah ^___^

Very nice.

Perhaps the bass should be a bit louder, but for the rest I personally have nothing much to say. I disagree a bit with what Nessbeatsfox said. I had no impression that the drums were going to kick the song off (I actually found it to be a good way to put them in). Those guitar solos were great.

However, this song is either in desperate need of a singer or of a main melody that acts as a "protagonist" (sorry, I'm no expert so I don't know the correct terminology... I hope you understand what I mean). For now it doesn't feel perfect yet, but I'm sure that you're more than capable of completing it.

Anyway, very good music once more from you. Great to have your good music back ^__^.
9/10
4.5/5 => 5/5

The Drums

The intro is very nice, and makes for a great picture. The one thing I didn't like was when the drums come in at the beginning around 0:40. They give the impression that they're going to be real hard and kick the song off, but they just slip back into the background and hide behind the side stick.

The lead guitar is very nice, and the transition at 1:49 is a nice change, but the song. I hear a bass, but it's very light. It would help to have a much stronger bass to pound through the song.

Filler's are good with the drums, but don't overdo it. Since the drums are so soft, throwing in so many fillers just doesn't fit IMO.

Great track though. A few mixing problems but still a good sound.