Hmm...

I loved the intro, it was beautiful and statuesque. But then when the breakdown came in, it sounded extremely out of place, and to me it didn't adequately match the beauty of the beginning. So at about 1:10-1:36 it seemed kind of weird, and then it went back down and then climaxed back up to the weirdness. All you really need to do is replace the the lead synth with something else, and make the beat stronger. The synth that comes in at 2:30 is great. I could see this song become very well done if you layer more things on, and change the synths. 7/10, 4/5