coolness

more timing my friend, this song has GREAT potential, its a GREAT video game track, but you cant do bass like that cuz it either clips or overpowers everything else, cuz u have to be able to hear the other synths.

awesome lil beat tho dude, if u put a master EQ on it and toned the bass WAY DOWN, it would sound great. jus make the bass loud enough so it is about to clip but doesnt (make it peak all tha way)

this has great potential, i think you should re-do it with new ideas.

btw don make it repeat that much, u have to change things up if u repeat.
great track
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